Comments for 100 Word Challenge

Comment on Katie’s 100 WC by siobhan

siobhan — Tue, 12 Feb 2013 11:44:00 +0000

this is great , wounder what was in the chest. keep up the good work for the 100 WC

Comment on Ellie’s 100wc by Mrs Fine 100WC Team

Mrs Fine 100WC Team — Mon, 11 Feb 2013 08:56:09 +0000

Hi Ellie, Lovely eerie piece of writing. The use of three word phrases describing your character’s feelings is very powerful and intensifies the overall atmosphere of helplessness and futility. Well done.

Comment on out of the blue 100wc by Nicola Richardson

Nicola Richardson — Sun, 10 Feb 2013 09:18:08 +0000

Your story made me laugh, I like the idea of an invisible dog taking part in a football match. I wonder how the other team felt about all the goals going in and they could not see who was scoring them? Don’t forget to check you have used punctuation to help your reader. It will add to your good use of imagination to make your writing even better.

Comment on Ethan’s and Molly’s 100wc by Mrs Stones (Team 100WC)

Mrs Stones (Team 100WC) — Fri, 08 Feb 2013 19:47:45 +0000

Hi Ethan and Molly,
This is quite a spooky and haunting piece of writing. I presume the little girl who appreared out of the blue was the ghost of the little girl? You have written in clear sentences that you have also punctuated correctly.
Great joint effort.
Mrs Stones
http://bradfordschools.net/blog/miriamlord100wc/

Comment on 100wc,Reece,Kaiden, by Thomas

Thomas — Fri, 08 Feb 2013 17:20:28 +0000

Good elipsis at the end but you needed capital letters alot of the time. Remember the capital letters as well which is the most important.

Comment on Alex and Luke’s 100wc by Mr Jones

Mr Jones — Thu, 07 Feb 2013 22:46:02 +0000

I want to know what happens enxt, the questions at the end are very effective. Well done.

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Comment on Ellie’s 100wc by Mr Jones

Mr Jones — Thu, 07 Feb 2013 22:44:42 +0000

Some lovely description and a range of punctuation used. Loved the questions at the start. Well done, Ellie.

Comment on ….Out of the blue…… by Mrs Prior - Team 100WC

Mrs Prior - Team 100WC — Thu, 07 Feb 2013 19:01:40 +0000

Well done. You have used a lot of excellent vocabulary here such as edged, fearful, emerged and sprinted. I like how you described the old man with his crumpled jacket.
Make sure you read your work through to check for the odd mistake. Can you spot something missing after ‘suddenly the world turned dark’
Great writing.
Mrs Prior – Team 100WC

Comment on cherrys and roseys great advencher by sophie

sophie — Thu, 07 Feb 2013 13:32:02 +0000

very well done i love your story

*)i love the adjectivs

wish)you need to put more puctuation

Comment on ….Out of the blue…… by 100wc

100wc — Thu, 07 Feb 2013 13:32:02 +0000

I REALLY LIKED THAT AMAZING 100%