It was the year 1935.Matt and Soffy had just been carefully zapped by an alien called a Zarg .A Zarg is kind of giant white spider that can’t make webs however they can shoot arrows out instead .They can live for up to three hundred and fifty years although they have the most toxic venom in the universe and they live on the planet Cohighderays .He pushed them in to a magical, turquoise worm hole that transported them to this time .In addition to that they were not on earth any longer instead they were on the planet Cohighderays …
Well done Anna on this weeks 100WC.
- Sara Green (Team 100WC) - March 19, 2012 at 10:13 pmA spider that can’t make webs but shoot arrows instead – very imaginative. You have used some great adjectives like’toxic venom.’ Also you’ve used some great connectives like ‘however’ and ‘in addition to.’
Keep up the good work.