Yippy’! Said Violet as she saw the sun. ‘Mum can I go out to play’! ‘Yes honey’! Said mum ‘yay’! So Violet went to get changed she put on a short sleeved t shirt and some genes and went out to play. Violet went down the road to her friend’s house and knocked on the door. The door opened ‘Hello’ said Violet ‘I gust worded if you wanted to come out to play’. ‘Ok’ said Rebecca.
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When they got back the weather changed for the worst. ‘Oh great’! Said Violet ‘let’s go inside and have some cockers and a drink! ‘Said Violet.Ok’! Said Rebecca.
This is a wonderful piece of writing. It made me want to go outside. Keep up the good work!
- Emily W.( St. John Vianney) - March 14, 2012 at 5:56 pm